Anniversary Card take 2

A huge thank-you to Anne and Denise for helping me tweak this!! You both are awesome! It is even more fantastic that they helped me not in person but through facebook! The improved version is on the left :)

Hi everyone, November 1st is our wedding anniversary and every year I make my husbands card. He saves all of them and loves them more than any gift I could purchase for him. So with that being said I want this card to be perfect! So I need your help and suggestions to tweak this card. I tend to over think them sometimes and add too much and I know alot of you are spectacular card makers and I would love to hear your suggestions:)

On this card for the sentiment I used a Pink by design stamp from the To the moon set. I love that stamp set! Here is a link to that set http://www.pinkbydesignstore.com/To-the-Moon.html

I created my own doilie flower by gathering a piece of Websters pages trim together and placing a Bobunny fall trinket in the center. The papers are kaiser Craft. The pearls are Bobunny. The craft colored lace is by kaisercraft and here is the link to it http://www.ebay.com/itm/Kaiser-Craft-Lace-Natural-/250748676834?pt=LH_DefaultDomain_0&hash=item3a61c92ae2. Here is a link also to the Bobunny trinkets! I think she sold out on the fall ones but she has others! http://stores.ebay.com/Princess-Crop-Shoppe/_i.html?_nkw=trinkets&submit=Search&_sid=40812442

Any suggestions are welcome!!!

Have a wonderful Halloween weekend!

Shelley